Levi, I love your story! This is my favourite story from you. I really like all of the interesting, creative words that you used like cheerful, awkward, enormous and beautiful. I also like how you used lots of detail to explain what a grapel is because I didn't know what a grapel was before. Good work on using all of your full stops and capital letters! You're a star.
Hi Levi, this is a very lovely story thank you for putting so much effort into your creative writing today. I like how you have used paragraphs to show the different discussions or themes, this tells me you have put a lot of thought into your writing.
Levi, I love your story! This is my favourite story from you. I really like all of the interesting, creative words that you used like cheerful, awkward, enormous and beautiful. I also like how you used lots of detail to explain what a grapel is because I didn't know what a grapel was before.
ReplyDeleteGood work on using all of your full stops and capital letters! You're a star.
From Miss Scanlan.
Hi Levi, this is a very lovely story thank you for putting so much effort into your creative writing today. I like how you have used paragraphs to show the different discussions or themes, this tells me you have put a lot of thought into your writing.
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